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Diary of a Messy Mind's avatar

I enjoyed reading this so much! Beautiful!

Every Mhyle's avatar

Thank youuu ❣️

Joseph Sale's avatar

I really enjoyed this. While I prefer formal poetry, I normally don't get on with heroic couplets, but this resonated. You conjured atmosphere very beautifully. Look forward to reading more.

Every Mhyle's avatar

Heyy… I'm glad you loved it❣️

Tsetsy's avatar

Wow. This feels like a whole midnight universe. The imagery is so vivid I could see the dancer spinning under the moon

Every Mhyle's avatar

Indeed it was a satisfying read.

Ask a psychopath's avatar

Absolutely beautiful!

Every Mhyle's avatar

I'm glad you loved it 😊

Naya's avatar

I really love this poem

And the different perspectives to reading it adds another kind of beauty

Every Mhyle's avatar

Thank you for reading it 🥹

Every Mhyle's avatar

Thank youu ❣️